Demon King of Phantom Thief Chapter 16

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This inexperience one isn’t that great that I have no typo or grammar mistake so please correct me in the comment. Thank you.

Enjoy the chapter.

Demon King of Phantom Thief, Elves Obey Him

Dwarves, Goblins, Orcs, Khajiits and Kobolds – Keith had been around many tribes this month.
And then he came again to the elves village.
The release of the elf was witnessed by Keith and Ginlow, the distinguished person who defeated the slave trader and came with Aleira’s [Gate].

When Talem opened the carriage door, the elves from captivity came down one after another.
The elves were all dressed cleanly.

However, it was impossible to hide the despair from the slow movement and their hollow eyes.
It was painful to see because the elves were originally a beautiful race.

The other elves run and hugged the elves who came down.
In their arms, the captive elves finally shed tears.
Their crying voice resound in the quiet forest.

“This is all the elves in my property! Please, only my life …”

Talem got off the carriage and rubbed his forehead on the ground.

“… our comrade is your property, is it? “

Keith remembered Fiore, who was with him that night.
Anger rose when seeing Fiore and the other elves shed tears.

“What should we do, Demon King-sama? Let’s get rid of him.”
“Hii, please other than that …!”

Hearing Ginlow’s words, Talem was trembling.

“Shut up, you insect, I’m thinking now.”

There were plenty of reasons to killed Talem, and there was a desire to do so.
However, the skill [Rule] suppressed it.

“… What do you all want to do, kill or save this man?”

When Keith asked the elves, they looked at each other.
After a while, the woman who was the chief of the elves went forward.

“The dirty blood had been shed lot enough. We don’t want anymore killing in this forest.”

Ginlow’s battle, Keith had seen it using Aleira’s [Scout] and [Projection], which showed the scene.
The elves no longer wanted to see any more bloodshed.

“So how about killing him out of the forest? I know a lot about how to torture and kill humans!”

Aleira’s red eyes shone.
Talem was kneeling down and sweat fell on his pale face.

(Probably … that’s not what the elves want)

Keith was thinking.
The elves never thought of revenge, they were too soft.

“Ginlow, the “body” that you let this man to drank, can you leave it as it is?”

 When Keith asked, Ginlow replied respectfully.

“Yes, it is possible, and that won’t be a hindrance for his body either.”
“I see. Raise your face.
“Ye, yess!”

Talem raised his face with mud on his forehead.

“The silver thing shall be embedded in your body until you die.”

Keith said with cold eyes.

“If I change my mind, you will die no matter where you are. Never touch the elves again.”
“Yes … that’s … of course …”

While touching his round belly with one hand, Talem replied.
This man couldn’t escape from Ginlow.

“And it’s an order.”

Keith took out the head of a mercenary from the wrapping clothes.
Keith had ordered Ginlow to recover it.

“Hold this and parade around the city. Spread the rumors. What will happen when someone touches the Elves again”

When Keith offered the mercenary’s head, Talem received it with a shivering hand.

“Don’t look down on the Demon King’s eyes. You are always watched.”
“Yes, understood! Of course!”
“Take off your clothes.”
“… what?”

Talem opened his mouth wide.

“I didn’t say anything difficult, I told you to take off your clothes.
“Hii, I understand! I’ll do it now!”

With his head still confused, Talem took off his clothes in a hurry, took off his coat, took off his jacket, took off his shirt and pants, and got naked.

“Turn back … yes, then, Aleira, as an example to the others.”
“Yes, leave it to me! Burn with the snake tongue – [Brand]”

A red light came out from the eye of Aleira’s wand.
The light swelled like a snake, with a fire on the tail.

“Guaaaaaa!”

The red light relentlessly clung to the skin.
Letters were carved on the back of the Talem that was suffering and sweating a lot.

“This one had stupidly bought the Elves’s wrath and lost everything.”

“Well done. Aleira, next.”

Keith held Aleira’s hand.
Keith was imagining the fountain in the central square of the capital.
Aleira saw Keith’s image and cast a spell.

“Cutting the darkness and then joining the pieces…”

A strong wind was blowing, a black mass appeared, and lightning strike the ground.
Then a [Gate] to the royal capital opened.

“Get up and jump into this”

Talem stood up, enduring the pain.

“And if I jump in … I … what will happen to me …?”
“Just get up and jump there, will you?.”

Keith picked up Talem’s head who was scared, and then strongly kicked Talem’s ass into the [Gate].

“Gyaaa!”

With a scream, Talem was sucked into the [Gate].
By now, he was probably in the fountain of the square.

“… well done, Ginlow”

As Keith called his name, Ginlow knelt down.

“If we were just to defeat the slave trader, it would have been possible for the other four heavenly kings, but it was because of your might that we could bring back the captive elves.”
“Your words of praise, I don’t deserve it.”

Ginlow dropped his head.

“Demon King-sama…”

The elven chief said.
Her expression looked a bit brighter than when Keith first visited this village.

“Thank you very much, really thank you very much. You have returned our family. You also made sure that no more slave trader will appear again … No word is enough to thank you, Demon King-sama.”
“You need to return that thanks properly.”

[Rule] was activated, and also [Tactics] …

“Your village was asked a sacrifice on a regular basis as an allegiance …”

The elven chief’s face became clouded quickly.
A demon king who needed a sacrifice and a slave trader who took away their friends.
For the elves, the degree of fear was different, but the two were essentially remained the same.
However–.

“There is no need for sacrifice anymore”

Keith thought it was the time.
Because the elves were feeling grateful for returning their families, this words was meaningful.
When the chief heard that, she squinted her eyes.

“Instead, I want soldiers. Elven archers are excellent.”

Keith glanced over the elves, who glanced back at him.

“Organize and train more people to form an army so that I can call them at my will at any time, and I promise to give the elf asylum.”
“……………”

When the elven chief heard it, she was crying.
Not just the chief.
Every single elves were crying.

Targeted by humans, sacrificed by the Demon King – the elves had endured while being exploited from two sides.
They had endured with a strong heart without breaking.
That was finally acknowledged today.

――We were people, not things.

“……………”

Watching the elves, Keith’s eyes were getting hot.
Although not as bad than them, Keith had a past where he was treated as an object.
However, the dignity of the Demon King must be preserved.
The elven chief, on the other hand, shed tears and bowed deeply.

“We Elves, promise to be one of the Demon Lord’s powers, whatever happen in the future “

With that words, the elves who gathered at the place all knelt to Keith at once.

(This solves one problem …)

Keith asked the elves to raise their heads and said that he wanted to eat with the elves, including the chief.
This order was well-received.
Tonight’s meal would not be as heavy as before.

(Should I ask Aleira to tell them one of her jokes?)

When Keith thought so-.

“… and the man said, “Stop it, that’s my mother!””

The result was a loud laugh.
Although it was a joke that was thought as stupid by dwarves — it seems the reaction was different depending on the race

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8 comments to Demon King of Phantom Thief Chapter 16

  • Guay  says:

    Thanks for the chapter!

    Cheers!

  • Sora  says:

    Thnx for the chapter!

  • Reald Dormond  says:

    Again cause why not. Same disclaimer as before, I am not sure if this is all of them or I am 100% correct, but just put what I felt was off.

    “Dwarves, Goblins, Orcs, Khajiit, Kobold-Keith had been around many tribes this month.” > “Dwarf, Goblin, Orc, Khajiit and Kobold; Keith had been around many tribes this month.” All of them have to be the same plurality, either all are plural (in which case, Khajiits and Kobolds instead) or all are using race titles and thus singular (which I put there), and a ; instead of a -, though – would work if you put a space on both sides, the final object of a list has a and/or instead of a comma as a way to cue in what the rest of the commas were and that the list has ended.

    “… our comrade is your property, those elves is?” > “… our comrades are your property, is it?”

    “The dirty blood has been shed lot enough. We don’t want anymore killing in this forest.” > “The dirty blood has been shed enough. We don’t want any more killing in this forest.”

    “Leave the silver thing embedded in your body until you die.”
    To
    “The silver thing shall be embedded in your body until you die.”
    Or
    “The silver thing will be embedded in your body until you die.”
    The original implies that Talem even has the ability to remove the offshoot and is somewhat casual, the edits are more commanding/authoritative (considering he is using Rule at the moment) with the first of the two being more aloof with shall. Alternatively, if Talem could actually remove it;
    “You will(shall) leave the silver thing embedded in your body until you die.”
    Though I find it weird he is calling Ginlow’s offshoot “the silver thing”.

    “Yes, understand! Of course!” > “Yes, understood! Of course!”

    “– the elves had endured while being exploited from two side.” > “– the elves had endured while being exploited from two sides.”

    “We, Elves, promise to be one of the Demon Lord’s powers, whatever happen ine the future …” > “We elves, promise to be one of the Demon Lord’s powers, whatever happens in the future.” Ellipses (the …) is are supposed to be used when words are being omitted but can be used to either show someone doing a long pause in the middle of their speech in dialog or if used at the end is them dragging out the last words/syllable. I doubt the elf chief is dragging the end of that declaration like that. Though if you are writing more formally you only use Ellipses for omitted words (I got into some nasty “debates” with an English Professor over that).

    Oh, and for the hell of it, though you might be being intentional with this one;

    “This inexperience one isn’t that great that I have no typo or grammar mistake so please correct me in the comment. Thank you.” > “This inexperienced one isn’t so great that I have no typo or grammar mistakes so please correct me in the comments. Thank you.”

    • Engineer Boy  says:

      Again cause why not?(lol) just kidding here. Once again thank you. And what the… You even correct my rant!

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  • Milanin  says:

    … Why do I feel like it was a joke about how Dwarf men and women both have beards…

  • Sitchi  says:

    Hi, Im new to the series, i’ve been binge reading from ep .1 and it feels promising.

    Thanks for translating, you’re doing great. And also thanks to the community that helps with the translation in the comments.

    Great work~~

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